Monday, November 30, 2015

Blood Drive Critique

Evan: beginning nat noise was good
He sounds like he needs a little excitement in his voice
Nick: placement of where B-roll was placed was good
Voice overs were kind of quite
Allison: good J and L edits
Rule of thirds was off with one person
Courtney: B-roll was very creative
A little jump cut while Austin was talking
Dema: creative voice overs
Hard to hear people being interviewed
Rosie: she got to the point quick and nicely
Camera a quite shaky at the beginning
Kiki: variation of a lot of things going on
Interviews were a little choppy
Rylee: good J and L edits
Voice over started a little late after one interview
Catherine: Got a lot of people in her video, nice variety
No name titles while interviewers popped up on screen
Alex: Good B-roll
Lots of pauses in voice over
Mitch: good quote he ended on
One shot had background noise while someone was talking
Nicole: good editing
Interviews were kind of quite
Drew: good attention on one person
Interviews were loud
Emily: good J and L edit
Voice overs kind of sounded like the questions asked
Conlin: funny quote to end on
Big pause after interview
Kyle: put nice research in Voiceovers
Variation in volume
Jacob: told a good story
J and L edits were that much used
Delaney: N/A
Abbey: creative voice overs
Iris was bright for an interview
Amy: good placement of all shots and B-roll
Couldn’t hear background noise at beginning
Chelsea: voice overs were really good
Voice overs didn’t really sound amused

I think I did a really good job on this project but when I saw it on the big screen I saw a couple of things I could improve. My first voice over sounded like an interview. The interview of Sophia was a bit quieter compared to the rest of the video, so I should of double checked the audio levels